From what I have seen of other threads(Critque) they seem to have had good turn outs, so following in that vein, I eventually came to the conclusion that there was no harm in making one myself as well. In addition to that reasoning, for much the same reason as Silim, I've been feeling distant, though these are personal reasons I've sorted out with Tsubine. I felt like there was a personal circle of Tsubine, Dai, Snopy, and Serenity, and things like our opinions, ideas, and other things didn't really matter so I just felt like not coming on in weeks. Of course, there was still that hurt in my heart for not having a chance to explore the new ideas with my race, which only served to make matters worse. In any case, I know that I do love rping and the chance to roleplay on BB based on Dialogue alone(because I don't understand how the battle system works and I don't try to touch things I don't understand. ) Which brings me to asking about things that could help me better myself as both roleplayer and writer, friend and confidant. There are some things I do believe I can fix as a writer, and I'll post them here and you add to that, it's a bit of a self-critique but not in a bad way, these are just things I planned on improving for a long time.
Self Critique 1: Over-Ambition: I feel like I fixed this a long time ago buttttt one glaring trait I possessed back then is that I possessed too much ambition when it came to plots for my characters, my urobuchi phase(a favorite writer of mine who specializes in writing tragic stories) if you will. I would try to break my characters to a T and there was no more a proper example than when I was on BBS, where Iori was a broken bird, in spirit, mind and body, and I took her through alot of cruel hard ships that nearly ruined the character for me. On NH, I fixed this, but it's something I want to control where i'm not necessarily trying to make my characters so tragic on the outside, and not revealed as much. In other words, learning the perfect balance between tragic drama and a reprieve at the end of it all.
Self Critique 2: One Dimensional characters: When I was first on NH, my muse for the site literally died at one point---partly because of missing out on plots due to my own inactivity, yet not completely so. A huge part of the feeling is that I tried to make so many characters that it was hard to come up with well-formulated personalities, delicately constructed desires, and personal thoughts. There were gems like my character Yuiko, Alicia, and a few others but overall... the rest were literally just copied from other series in certain ways with their personalities and other things retained, just brought into a different universe---the bleach universe to be exact. I'm not saying I probably won't try to make more than 5 or 6, I may make quite a few but trust myself to know it should never even reach into a 200, 100, 90, or even an 80, 70, 60, or 50.
I plan on fleshing out the crucial parts of my characters personalities so that the writing becomes more genuine and intense and overall, so it leads to an enjoyable experience for me and my partner.
Primary examples have been in the changes with Iori and Miki.
I deconstructed Miki's first personality which was one that revolved around promiscuity, to rebuilding it into a very deceitful character who lies but is struggling with personal turmoils on the inside.
Iori is still very much the same with her tomboyish personality, but from a talk with Silim, I decided to include some interesting real world issues, thus creating a more rebellious rather than "Tomboy because it's cool" personality. I hope to do this with future characters.
Self Critique 3: Pride: Everyone of you can attest to the fact that as a writer and a person, I sometimes wallow in self-depreciation, no matter what I'm told. Some days I can be so ashamed if I'm not able to come up with a perfectly constructed sentence beaming with eloquence, that I berate myself, concluding that petty, simple mistakes like these make me a bad writer. That's idiotic. What's worse is that, I didn't even try to do anything to improve myself, accepting failure, content with wallowing in the mud, when I should have been aspiring to reach a mighty moutain, and accept failure and get better from it in order to get there. Well, from now on, that's what I will make a conscious effort to achieve. If I do come on looking out of sorts, it'll honestly be because of my personal life or something else entirely, but it will no longer be because of my writing.
Disclaimer: I know it's unfair to ask for activity not to be spoken about as it may be the main reason for my troubles, but I realllllllly can't help at times. As I tell Tsubine, I don't have my own computer, most of everything tech wise in the house is my mother, including this laptop i'm on. Now that she has something else she can use, I can say there will be time for me to be more active, but try not to crucify me about it, because it's something that can't be helped.
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